THUMBS UP OR THUMBS DOWN:

THIS IS THE PARAGRAPHES RANKED FOR THE WORST TO THE BEST:

1 IS THE WORST BECAUSE IT IS TO SHORT AND IT IS NOT FORMAL AT ALL.
NEXT IS 4 BECAUSE THE WORDS ARE SPELLT WRONG AND IT HAS PUNCUATION.
6 IS NEXT BECAUSE IT IS WAY TO SHORT AND IT IS NOT FORMAL AGAIN AND IT HAS SLANG IN IT.
7 BECAUSE IT HAS NO REASONING TO SAY THAT SHE OR HE LIKED THE BOOK.
8 IS NEXT BECAUSE IT IS GOOD BUT NOT GREAT IF HIS FRIEND HAS A PROBLEM WITH BEING FIRED THEN HE CAN EMAIL THE BOSS.
NEXT IS 5 BECAUSE IT ONLY HAS ONE FULL STOP IN IT WITH A BIG PARAGRAPH.
3 & 2 ARE NEXT I CAN NOT PICK BETWEEN THE BUT THE ARE BOTH REALLY GOOD THEY HAVE GOOD PUNCUATION AND THE ARE WRITEN OUT NICE.