commenting guidlines

THUMBS UP OR THUMBS DOWN:

THIS IS THE PARAGRAPHES RANKED FOR THE WORST TO THE BEST:

1 IS THE WORST BECAUSE IT IS TO SHORT AND IT IS NOT FORMAL AT ALL.
NEXT IS 4 BECAUSE THE WORDS ARE SPELLT WRONG AND IT HAS PUNCUATION.
6 IS NEXT BECAUSE IT IS WAY TO SHORT AND IT IS NOT FORMAL AGAIN AND IT HAS SLANG IN IT.
7 BECAUSE IT HAS NO REASONING TO SAY THAT SHE OR HE LIKED THE BOOK.
8 IS NEXT BECAUSE IT IS GOOD BUT NOT GREAT IF HIS FRIEND HAS A PROBLEM WITH BEING FIRED THEN HE CAN EMAIL THE BOSS.
NEXT IS 5 BECAUSE IT ONLY HAS ONE FULL STOP IN IT WITH A BIG PARAGRAPH.
3 & 2 ARE NEXT I CAN NOT PICK BETWEEN THE BUT THE ARE BOTH REALLY GOOD THEY HAVE GOOD PUNCUATION AND THE ARE WRITEN OUT NICE.

T H E T I G E R

One day i was in a forest and just before i was about to leave i saw something in the corner of my eye it was a big striped beast leaping over the big fallen down trees, as i was thinking i was going absolutely mental then i slowly walked around in a circle then i saw it again so as i followed my eye with the striped beast I knew what it was it was a big fat TIGER even though i was terrified of it hurting me i sprinted to the exit to get home. A few days later i was watching the news and it said that a tiger just died because he was old to live .